Build-A-Bully

Deeply unpleasant vn, but I couldn't put it down. It's sad getting to know a lot about the girls before they're inevitably killed by us. Nikki and Maria are both really good at being sympathetic characters, and even though Denver is grossed out by Gina I found her to be a decently understandable awkward horny teen. All the girls are too trusting of Denver (especially gina please gina I know you're desperately horny but please have more self preservation) but since it's a way to move the plot along I don't really see it as personal character flaws 

I know Charity didn't supply a bolt gun or any other semi-humane way of going for the brain efficiently since she doesn't care are being merciful, but I kept yelling at Denver to at least cut their large arteries while they're still unconscious so they'd hopefully bleed out before waking up. Clearly preserving the "freshness" of the blood in their limbs doesn't matter since we don't even get any details on how the body parts are being preserved....

Denver seemed to grow to like killing more over time, but simultaneously hated them screaming and fighting back, so you'd think after the first time she would have been more efficient. Well, she's meant to be sloppy and deeply flawed, and it make the murders even more impossible to stomach as ignorable or tolerable, so it makes a good lasting impression  

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I feel like there's some sort of theme that could be made out of how we're introduced to Charity verbally picking apart these girls' bodies and personalities, and it's easy to grow numb to it as classic maladjusted teenager stuff that Charity would, hopefully, grow out of in time (although she'll be forever responsible for the damage she caused). And then during the murder scenes, she makes Denver literally pick them apart, and Denver even gets in on the complaining with how hard it is to cut into certain areas and scoffing at their involuntary reactions. Some kind of objectification parallel....

thanks for making something!

Imagine a world where Dr. Frankenstein was a total pushover of a socially awkward young woman, and her grand dream was to defy death and resurrect a brat with a personality so thoroughly vapid and nasty that you'd swear her "accidental" death was 100% a murder (and that you've half a mind to buy the guy who did it a beer)...

Oh, how cruel this VN is~  To string you along with all of these different cute girls, letting you get to know them and showing you all these glimpses of who they are beneath the surface—only to then show you, in cold, unflinching detail, how they look beneath the surface, heh heh heh.  Your writing made my heart warm and then made my stomach churn, and the experience is absolutely all the stronger for it~

I also very much respect that you took the time to make so many different CGs for all of the variations, both for the different cuts when getting parts and for the resulting endings!  Choosing to gate the good ending behind making Denver eat was diabolical, by the way, heheheheh~

Great work across the board!  Denver is far better to Charity than she'll ever deserve, but hey, this is a toxic yuri story, so little details like "deserving" and "fairness" don't matter too much, now do they~?

this game was so much fun, I played it through 3x in one day to get all the different endings. i really loved all the characters <3